Self evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

2) What did you do well?
 I did well in researching and examining a question from various angles.

3) What could you have done better?

I could have done better in conclusion.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

The confirmation, which lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument, and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?

As teacher pointed out, I 'll try to clear my conclusion.My narration is strong. I do a good job explaining the foundations of the issue, and I prepare my

 audience to hear my argument.